tonal dropout
a hollowing of self / for the negative space challenge

a life lived in dark rooms
celluloid imprints
shades reversed
white now black
black now absent
see through

a hollowed out figure
- frozen -
where life once flowed
flawed - sure -
but full

in the gaps
head thrown back
echoes of laughter
pealing
- peeling -
from gelatinous strips
/ a moment snapped /
broken
transformed to transparency
trapped in a time
that
has
now
trailed
into
tedium
taking her with it

keeping her captive while life goes on
and
she
f
a
d
e
s
over exposed
and under-recognised
a shadow of self
(outline intact)
contact printed
shining light through paper
over
and over
a complete tonal drop out
until all that is left
is the hollowed out figure
that
looks
a little
like
her

About the Creator
ali
a tangled mess of thoughts. occasionally a clear one bursts through. how about writing things in a public forum? seems wise.
she / her
unceded Wurundjeri & Boon Wurrung Lands
substack: aliwriteswords
insta / upscrolled: @aliwriteswords
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