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tonal dropout

a hollowing of self / for the negative space challenge

By aliPublished 5 days ago • 1 min read
Top Story - October 2026
life in negative motion / photo by Ali

a life lived in dark rooms

celluloid imprints

shades reversed

white now black

black now absent

see through

baby ali (circa 1995) / photo by ge

a hollowed out figure

- frozen -

where life once flowed

flawed - sure -

but full

baby ali fading / photo by ge (edited by ali)

in the gaps

head thrown back

echoes of laughter

pealing

- peeling -

from gelatinous strips

/ a moment snapped /

broken

transformed to transparency

trapped in a time

that

has

now

trailed

into

tedium

taking her with it

ali fading / photo by ge (edited by ali)

keeping her captive while life goes on

and

she

f

a

d

e

s

over exposed

and under-recognised

a shadow of self

(outline intact)

contact printed

shining light through paper

over

and over

a complete tonal drop out

until all that is left

is the hollowed out figure

that

looks

a little

like

her

ali inverted / photo by ge (edited by ali)

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ali

a tangled mess of thoughts. occasionally a clear one bursts through. how about writing things in a public forum? seems wise.

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unceded Wurundjeri & Boon Wurrung Lands

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