Choke me with your deepest darkest detestation
Burn me with sulphuric or nitric acid
intent to disfigure, maime and torture
Aim for my face, skins burning tissue
Expose and dissolve my bones
Render me blind to my place in this world
Leave me to question if this was my fault
I’m telling you to take these scars away
My family suffered because of me
Listen to my depression, far from endogenous
My mothers heart ive stricken
Everybody looks at me with pity
They say what a shame
She has lost her beauty
They say I am cursed
My heart is darkened
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Van dongen was hardened,
By his image in the mirror
Fed through a tube his light got dimmer
4 months in a coma,
But when he arise,
He pointed with his tongue and tears in his eyes
Daddy I can’t speak
There’s hope when he dies
His girlfriend was evil
Euthanasia is peaceful
To stop the upheaval, he cuts all ties.
🙏 Thank you for reading
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A/N I’ve never been a victim of an acid attack, but when I looked at the news I learnt that a 14 year old girl had suffered that fate. Although not much was said about why it happened, I wanted to bring our minds to her and the poem above is how she might be feeling. Based on my research on how others who have gone through this, said they were feeling.
I dug some more and came across Van Dongen, his story was very tragic and I wish he was still here with us, but I included him and his story in this poem to remind us that we suffer together, not apart.
About the Creator
Caitlin Charlton
Writer first. Close reader and self‑taught critic shaping eloquence.
A survivor reclaiming her territory.
I write dark fiction and poetry through symbol, shadow, and fracture.
Always sharpening the craft. ✏️🔥👠
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