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Tobadco

A fatal addiction

By AphoticPublished 12 months ago 1 min read
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Tobadco
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I once met a girl named McKinley

Who smoked like she was a chimney

Nine packs a day

Took her larynx away

Now she puffs through her trachea grimly

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Aphotic

Horror|Sci-Fi|Fantasy|Poetry

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  • Cezanne Libellen9 months ago

    Ooof. Ouch. Awesome story, PACKS a shock (pardon the pun).

  • Cathy holmes11 months ago

    Oohh dark and probably accurate. Well done.

  • Naomi Gold12 months ago

    That escalated quickly 😆

  • River Joy12 months ago

    Oh I love a dark limerick. This is excellent.

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