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Tobadco

A fatal addiction

By AphoticPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Tobadco
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I once met a girl named McKinley

Who smoked like she was a chimney

Nine packs a day

Took her larynx away

Now she puffs through her trachea grimly

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Aphotic

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Comments (4)

  • Cezanne Libellenabout a year ago

    Ooof. Ouch. Awesome story, PACKS a shock (pardon the pun).

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Oohh dark and probably accurate. Well done.

  • Naomi Goldabout a year ago

    That escalated quickly 😆

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