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To Walk Among the Stars

Dreaming of Home

By S. A. CrawfordPublished 2 months ago 1 min read
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In the heart of an explosion that has lasted for aeons,

we stand and look up.

Solitary yet tied to the heavens.

We are made of stars,

and illuminated by their shine.

*

Under these same stars,

a man carved for his child,

a wooden toy.

In its cryptic smile you can see the human face,

and it is kind.

Those eyes are warm and curious,

the smile is crooked,

and there are scars, yes,

but so much beauty.

*

To walk among the ghosts of dead stars,

is to see our own history like a smattering of glitter,

on a black canvas.

And wonder -

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About the Creator

S. A. Crawford

Writer, reader, life-long student - being brave and finally taking the plunge by publishing some articles and fiction pieces.

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  1. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

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    Well-structured & engaging content

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  • Babs Iverson2 months ago

    Descriptive and intriguing!!! Beautifully written!!!❤️❤️💕

  • Donna Renee2 months ago

    Oh this is gorgeous!! I love the open ending feel too.

  • Dana Crandell2 months ago

    Absolutely loved this! 💝

  • Nice job🧡👌📝💯

  • Beautifully done, S.A.!

  • This is beautiful! 🤍🕊️✨

  • Celia in Underland2 months ago

    Very lovely. This line 'We are made of stars,' caught me so much, Beautifully written-Love it! 🤍🤍🤍

  • velasco liama2 months ago

    nice poem

  • Paul Stewart2 months ago

    Ooooooooh. This is a stunning little poem, S.A. Really nicely done!

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