Escape from the city...
Come with me, I have something to show you...
Look up to the bright sky!
I like them... do you?
Pick one, quickly! Your favourite!
See? It's like another world,
Enjoy the moment before it's too late!
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I First Saw Him
When I first saw him sitting on the wall, relaxed and looking out over the water, I was sure he wasn't a local. Not including children, there are only about 250 or 300 of us in this area full-time, though that number is ten-fold in the summer, and I know everyone at least by sight or by family resemblance. And yet, the way he sat looked familiar and started my mind sorting and discarding among the families I knew, not quite like this one, not quite like that one.
By Natalie Wilkinson7 days ago in Fiction
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Well said , such positivity
This is lovely. Good luck
Excellent work
This is a top story for me
This poem is filled with youthful wonder! When I was a boy. the stars seemed so much brighter. When did I stop seeing the night sky? Loved it, Anna!
I love this, Anna! There’s so much to see and feel away from the city ❤️😊 great job, as usual!