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Cognitive of BLUE,
Oceans, gas flames, eyes, birds, skies,
Remembering, YOU.
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About the Creator
Babs Iverson
Barbara J Iversen, also known as Babs Iverson, lives in Texas and loves her grandkids to the moon and back. After writing one story, she found that writing has many benefits especially during a pandemic and a Texas-size Arctic Blast.
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Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme
Expert insights and opinions
Arguments were carefully researched and presented
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Comments (11)
Thank you!! Great Haiku!! 🥰💖 I'm getting ready for a rhyme tomorrow and got carried away with my response, so I deleted it!! Sorry!
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Beautiful 💙
Lovely haiku!
Great Babs! sorry I didn't see it 'til now.
Sweet! 🥰
Awww, this was so lovely!
Good one. Love the second line.
I love how you made me reread the second line several times. Wow, so many descriptive words could fit in seven syllables.
This is so adorable love it 💓
awwww
Nice 💙😊👍