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They're not Airplanes

If I could use a wish

By Thavien YliasterPublished about a year ago 1 min read
They're not Airplanes
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Up in the night sky

I see comets streaking by

Teardrops far up high

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Made of ice and dust

I wish upon them, I thrust

My hopes that I trust

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I wish You were here

The sky sheds stars with my tears

You’ve been gone for years

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On this ball of dirt

You left me behind, waiting

My heart aches from hurt

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Thavien Yliaster

Thank You for stopping by. Please, make yourself comfortable. I'm a novice poet, fiction writer, and dream journalist.

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Comments (9)

  • Mike Singleton - Mikeydredabout a year ago

    Excellent words

  • Mariann Carrollabout a year ago

    Beautiful 😍

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Brilliant & beautiful!!!💕💖😊

  • Holly Pheniabout a year ago

    So moving...

  • Dana Stewartabout a year ago

    Wow. Lovely piece.

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Beautiful piece. Well done.

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    This is really beautiful and emotional. I loved the imagery in this. I've always loved stargazing. Awesome.

  • Veronica Coldironabout a year ago

    This is such a beautiful, almost dreamy poem!! You really are quite a poet!

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