the world can wait for me now
a haiku
Photo by David Watkis on Unsplash
slowing down, breathing
the world can wait for me, now
come what may, in time
About the Creator
Rhe
human making art
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme
Doing it for the troops
The others dropped like flies around me. We fought and struggled to get to this point. I'm the only one left now. The objective is right there. A mere two hundred feet away. The last of my team got a bullet to the head right next to me, but I couldn't do anything. I was able to locate and neutralise the sniper as he shot my friend, so his death was at least not in vain.
By Mohammed Darasi4 days ago in Fiction
Comments (9)
Short, but quite meaningful... I loovee it ❤️ Keep up the good work!!
Congrats on Top Story!🥳🥳🥳
Amazing job!
Such a beautiful haiku! Your work thrives in this form.
Amazing job! Keep up the outstanding work—congrats!
A beautiful piece that feels like a deep breath
Rhe, your haiku strikes a deep chord with the reader's psyche as it masterfully captures the idea of finding comfort and serenity in the present moment.
There's a lot of tranquility here which gets to the heart of the form. love it.
Loved this! You created a real sense of calm.