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The wind

The music played on

By Antoinette L BreyPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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The wind
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Dear Steve

I cried when I heard you died

Not even a year since being a groom

Your bride shook at the viewing, I watched in silence

Feeling her pain

Months before

You had shared with me , your love story

I had smiled, assuming

kindness would bring kindness

And you would experience love , for years, in it's glory

I know you were not unnerved

That you would feel that God had a reason

but I still can not find an answer

Why you two can not be dancing on this earth

To continue your new life with you virgin wife

To have the joy you deserved

Sincerely, Your sad friend

Antoinette

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About the Creator

Antoinette L Brey

I am an elder in a time of freedom. I am now retired. All i want to do is have fun. Without a daily routine, my imagination is one of my only salvations. I am not planning on writing a book, it is just for my own pleasure

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  • C. H. Richardabout a year ago

    I'm so sorry for your loss. Beautifully penned Epistolary ♥️ for your friend.

  • The Invisible Writerabout a year ago

    This was touching and poignant. I’m sorry for your loss.

  • Tiffany Gordon about a year ago

    Beautifully penned! I'm sorry 4 your loss!

  • I'm so sorry for your loss 🥺

  • Dana Crandellabout a year ago

    A very touching letter. Well done!

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