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The Wilted Rose

A Poem on Handling Disappointment

By Michelle LiewPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
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The Wilted Rose
Photo by Silvestri Matteo on Unsplash

Disheartenment is overwhelming. A myriad of feelings washes over you. Anger. Embarrassment. Jealousy. Betrayal. And of course, hopelessness. 

Disappointment washes over us when we do not meet expectations. We feel dejected when we invest our emotions in relationships or endeavours only to realise that the returns are not as significant as they should be.  The sense of loss, of course, leads to moroseness. 

A wilted rose

Broken spirit

Crumbled leaves drop one by one

Death catches up

Enveloping it in dusk

Fire in its petals gone

Growth curtailed, its goals unmet

Hard, dry soil yields no fruit

Icy water shrinks its roots

Jangled and rotten, so it should

Kindle its own stem with rays of kindness

Love its own petals with sane joyful sun

Moisten its own leaves with refreshing water

Nourish its own roots with quiet care

On its stamen, welcome the fly

Passage of time will bring it to life

Quiet reflection on how petals flopped

Rekindle roots with joyful thoughts

Stem stands once again 

Thorns will rise sharp once more

Under its roots, when water flows

Vermillion rises in its petals

When the sun reappears

Xenith of growth it will reach again

Young buds of red will emerge

Zoom towards it with a flourish.

Zoom towards its rays it will. 

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About the Creator

Michelle Liew

Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran4 months ago

    Oh wow, I didn't realise it was an Abecedarian until I got to V. Very well done!

  • Anna 4 months ago

    Incredible work, very well written! Check out my poems as well! Have a wonderful day!🥰🫶❤️

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