Poets logo

The Whiskey Sun

A commentary on the many Californians (including me) moving to states like Tennessee.

By Sarah LoydPublished 4 years ago • 1 min read
painting by Elisabeth Loyd (my sister)

Welcome to the whiskey sun

Where folks have lived for generations

Transplants are a dime a dozen

But we still cling to our traditions

***

I admit I'm one of those girls

Stuck in the middle of the crossroads

They say that you have to choose

But I'm a citizen of two worlds

***

California is my past

Tennessee is my future

I was born as a grizzly bear

Now I'm a mockingbird, a singing creature

***

My heart belongs to the beach

There I bathed in the golden sun

But my dreams will stay in the Smokey Mountains

Here I come, whisky sun

***

Come on down to the whiskey sun

Where the west coast meets the eastern sky

Horses race on electric wheels

I'll take my beer with a bottle of wine

***

See a land of cowgirls

Mixed with the surfer queens

They both wear daisy dukes

While climbing a wave of trees

***

California days behind me

Tennessee days ahead

Trade bikinis for suede boots

But why not keep both instead

***

My heart belongs to the beach

My dreams now live in a raging river

Come on down to the whiskey sun

To be a creature of two worlds forever

I hope you like my poem and my sister's painting. Follow me on Twitter (@musicl0v3) and various Vocal Facebook groups.

nature poetryartsurreal poetry

About the Creator

Sarah Loyd

I love movies, music, TV, and all things entertaining. I also love to write poetry. Follow me on X @melodies_marie. You can also find me on Pinterest @sloydmarie.

Enjoyed the story? Support the Creator.

Subscribe for free to receive all their stories in your feed.

Subscribe For Free

Reader insights

Comments

There are no comments for this story

Be the first to respond and start the conversation.

Sign in to comment
    Written by Sarah Loyd