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The wake

A way to say goodbye

By Lark HanshanPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
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The wake
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Coffee at the top

Watch the sunrise together

His ashes and me

heartbreaksad poetrynature poetry
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About the Creator

Lark Hanshan

A quiet West Coast observer. Writing a sentence onto a blank page and letting what comes next do what it must.

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  • Dr. Constance Quigley2 years ago

    Oh wow. Sad but it feels so full of hope.

  • Dawn Salois2 years ago

    Very heartbreaking poem!

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Heartfelt, heartbreaking!!! Dropped a heart!!!

  • KJ Aartila2 years ago

    Sadly beautiful. :)

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