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The Voice in the Rain

It always started with the rain.

By Imran Ali ShahPublished 6 months ago • 3 min read

It always started with the rain.

Not the loud, thunder-crashing kind—but the quiet, steady kind that tapped gently against the windows like someone asking to be let in. The kind most people ignored.

But Ayaan never could.

The first time he heard it, he thought it was his imagination. He was sitting alone in his small apartment, lights off, watching raindrops race each other down the glass. That’s when he heard it—a soft whisper, almost blending with the rain itself.

“Ayaan…”

He froze.

His heart pounded, and he turned around quickly. No one was there. Just silence. Just the rain.

He laughed nervously. “I need sleep,” he muttered to himself.

But then it came again.

“Ayaan… listen.”

This time, it was clearer.

He stood up slowly, his breath shallow. “Who’s there?” he asked, his voice trembling.

No answer.

Just rain.

Days passed. The rain stopped. And so did the voice.

Ayaan tried to forget it, convincing himself it was stress, loneliness, anything but real. But deep down, something about it felt… familiar.

Then, a week later, the rain returned.

And so did the voice.

“You’re not okay.”

Ayaan clenched his fists. “Stop it,” he whispered. “This isn’t real.”

“Why are you pretending?”

The words hit him harder than he expected. He sat down, running his hands through his hair.

“I’m fine,” he said, louder this time. “I’m fine.”

The voice didn’t argue.

It just asked softly, “Then why do you feel so empty?”

That night, Ayaan didn’t sleep.

Because the voice didn’t stop.

It didn’t scream. It didn’t threaten. It simply… spoke. Asking questions he had been avoiding for years. Reminding him of things he had buried.

“You stopped drawing.”

“I just got busy.”

“No. You got scared.”

Ayaan shut his eyes tightly. “I said stop.”

But the rain kept falling. And the voice kept speaking.

“You stopped calling your mother.”

“…I forgot.”

“You didn’t forget. You chose silence.”

A tear slipped down his cheek.

Over time, the fear began to fade.

And something else replaced it.

Curiosity.

Whenever it rained, Ayaan would sit by the window, waiting. Listening. Not running away anymore.

“Why are you doing this?” he asked one evening.

There was a pause.

Then the voice answered, softer than ever.

“Because you stopped listening to yourself.”

Ayaan’s breath caught.

“What do you mean?”

Another pause. Then:

“I am you.”

The world felt still.

“You…?” he whispered.

“Not who you are now,” the voice continued. “Who you were… before you gave up.”

Ayaan’s chest tightened. Memories flooded back—sketchbooks, dreams of becoming an artist, laughter, hope. A version of himself he barely recognized anymore.

“I didn’t give up,” he said weakly.

“You did,” the voice replied gently. “But you can come back.”

Days turned into weeks.

And slowly, Ayaan began to change.

He picked up a pencil again.

At first, his hands trembled. His lines were messy, uncertain. But the voice was there.

“It’s okay,” it whispered through the rain. “Just start.”

He called his mother.

The conversation was awkward at first, but then warm. Real.

“I missed you,” she said.

“I missed you too,” he replied, his voice breaking.

One evening, as the rain poured like never before, Ayaan sat by the window with a finished sketch in his hands.

It wasn’t perfect.

But it was his.

“I did it,” he said softly.

No answer came.

He waited.

The rain continued, but the voice… was gone.

Ayaan felt a sudden panic. “Wait… don’t go,” he whispered.

For a moment, there was nothing.

Then, faintly, almost lost in the rain:

“You don’t need me anymore.”

Ayaan smiled, tears mixing with quiet laughter.

“Thank you,” he said.

The rain slowed.

And for the first time, the silence didn’t feel empty.

It felt peaceful.

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