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The Truth and Nothing But the Truth

Kill Me With The Truth

By EYHCSPublished 9 months ago β€’ 1 min read
Top Story - August 2023
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The Truth and Nothing But the Truth
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Kill me with the truth.

The lie is so sweet and tender.

Runs down my spine like the lizard you are.

The truth might be bitter fruit.

But it stems from the root.

Ease your tongue upon my brow.

And the fallacies will create a frow.

By Adrian Swancar on Unsplash

No human is ever 100% right all the time.

None of the prophets were 100% right all of the time.

The disciples were not 100% right all the time.

Sometimes it is okay to be wrong,

For it is where our humility lives.

Jesus was even corrected at least once according to the written account of his time with the disciples.

Our mistake is thinking when we find or learn we are wrong

That we should hide it.

Instead,

Acknowledge it,

Embrace it,

Learn from it,

Then let it go.

You are not God, even though you were made in his image.

An image is rarely an exact replication of the original.

Thanks for reading and joining me in another poem on the human condition. If it stirred your emotions 🎀, please drop a comment πŸ’¬. If you like the vibe drop a heart πŸ’— and subscribe πŸ’Œ.

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EYHCS

Poet by birth. Writer by craft. Artist by nature. I write poems, prose, short stories, fiction, and realism works of art dissecting the human condition and the resilience of the human mind. Many of my pieces are metaphoric stanzas.

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  • Jay Kantor8 months ago

    Dear Ms. EyhcsΒ - You Tickle my Spine with the Truth. I'm so glad that our Ms. Novel Allen introduced you to me. *Although your eclectic offerings are so closely grouped together I can hardly keep up with you. *But as I scroll through your gorgeous headings I've subscribedΒ to you with pleasure. Jay Jay Kantor, Chatsworth, California 'Senior' Vocal Author - Vocal Village Community -

  • Trista Harrison8 months ago

    I love this poem! It's true we often feel shame and embarrassment when we make mistakes, but instead, we should embrace those mistakes to grow and live to our full potential in life. Like you said, no one is 100% correct, but the beauty of being human is that we can continuously grow and mature throughout life.

  • Jaslynn8 months ago

    Love it !

  • Rob Angeli8 months ago

    Amen to that, honest and splendidly composed. Congrats on a well-deserved Top Story!

  • Lamar Wiggins8 months ago

    Hurray!!! back to say, Congrats!

  • Missclicked8 months ago

    incredible! loved reading this

  • ANFAS8 months ago

    nice

  • Bri Craig8 months ago

    I love the way you opened this poem.

  • Tiffany Gordon 8 months ago

    Congrats on your TOP STORY!

  • Real Poetic8 months ago

    Congratulations! πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰

  • Kendall Defoe 8 months ago

    Okay, this is a TS winner!

  • Congratulations on your Top StoryπŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰

  • Morgana Miller8 months ago

    Beautiful. I love accountability and a good redemption arc, no one is irredeemable in my eyes; but self-honesty is always step 1 on that path. You captured this nuance so well, with so much TRUTH.

  • Jazzy 8 months ago

    I love how you talked about the human condition 😳 so good and congrats on top story! ❀️

  • Test8 months ago

    Gorgeous! So poweful and strong Loved these lines so much ' The lie is so sweet and tender. Runs down my spine like the lizard you are.' Congratulations on Top story! 🀍

  • Hannah Logan8 months ago

    BEAUTIFUL! I have found the Truth overtakes you rattles tingles shakes you... And when those so certain demand you to defend and prove... The Truth whispers, "Beloved, stand quiet. and be not moved."

  • Ashley Lima8 months ago

    Sooo good. Congratulations!

  • Paul Stewart8 months ago

    This is awesome - so glad Lamar gave it some attention on Raise Your Voice. Well done on Top Story!

  • ❀️From the Root-πŸ«΅πŸΎπŸ«ΆπŸΎπŸ’―πŸ“β€ΌοΈ

  • Lamar Wiggins9 months ago

    Wow! This is so profound in its message... Bravo, my friend! And thank you for bringing this eye opener to life. Amen! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

  • Novel Allen9 months ago

    Ai Caramba. What a poem this is. Had to read it twice. Just what the doc ordered right now. This is magnificent. Making a note of it.

  • Omgggg, this was sooooo powerful! Phenomenal poem!

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