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The Thing Behind Me

Poem of unseen pursuit and silent dread

By Tim CarmichaelPublished 5 months ago • 1 min read

A cold dread curdles deep inside.

Something massive tracks my path.

It lurks directly at my back.

*

This unseen thing pushes upon reality.

It distorts the very structure of the hallway.

The atmosphere grows stale,

becoming a viscous medium.

*

My frantic movements crawl.

Every nerve ending shrieks a warning.

My senses perceive only an absolute absence.

*

An abyss gazes into my soul.

A presence so ancient and incomprehensible

makes my sanity teeter upon the brink

of total dissolution.

*

The shadows seem to writhe.

They elongate into impossible shapes

that defy mortal logic.

*

I feel the cold exhalation

of some squamous thing upon my neck.

A frigid draft flows from a realm

far removed from human understanding.

*

My vision remains fixed ahead.

I fear that turning my head

might reveal something so blasphemous

my mind would fracture beyond repair.

*

This lingering menace refuses form.

It mocks me with its oppressive proximity.

*

No sound manifests.

Only the deafening roar

of my terrified cognition.

*

My pace accelerates.

A primal urge drives escape.

*

I yearn for sanctuary,

yet understand this pursuit

transcends physical space.

*

It is a tether forged

in the blackest depths

of a forgotten eon.

*

The sensation of being studied persists,

an indelible stain upon consciousness.

*

I remain trapped

in a recursive loop of anticipation

eternally fleeing

something that never reveals itself.

*

The dark expanse behind me grows denser,

hungry for my surrender

to the gravity of the unknown.

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About the Creator

Tim Carmichael

Let your becoming be louder than your fear, and your smallest steps become the road you once thought impossible to walk. An Appalachian poet and cookbook author my book Beautiful and Brutal Things is on Amazon, Link 👇

https://a.co/d/537XqhW

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    Written by Tim Carmichael