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The Tear For The Comrades

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By Joye C LangePublished 21 days ago Updated 21 days ago 1 min read
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The Tear For The Comrades
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THAT FATEFUL DAY DECEMBER SEVENTH

NO ONE WOULD EVER THINK ON A SUNDAY

THE BEAUTIFUL ISLAND OF HAWAII

WITH IT'S MANY SHIPS AND SOLDIERS

WOULD BE ATTACKED

BUT THAT WAS TO BE THE DAY

THAT WOULD GO DOWN IN INFAMY

A BATTLE WOULD START

MANY LIVES WOULD BE LOST

A YOUNG BOY WOULD BE OUT

IN A FIELD SMILING AND WAVING

TO A PILOT SO FAR UP IN THE AIR

THAT PILOT WAS A JAP

THE BOY'S LIFE HE DID SPARE

BUT OVER NINETEEN HUNDRED SOLDIERS

WOULD NOT HAVE THAT SAME FATE

THEY WOULD LOSE THEIR LIVES THAT DAY

TRYING TO PUT OUT THE FIRES ABOARD THE SHIPS

AND HELPING THEIR FELLOW MAN

THE NURSES AND DOCTORS AT THE BARRACKS

HURRIED VALIANTLY TO SAVE AS MANY

PERSONNEL AS THEY COULD

THE TIME WAS SO PRECIOUS

TRYING TO DO SO MUCH GOOD

THE OIL STILL DRIPS

FROM THE TANKERS BELOW

EIGHTY-FOUR YEARS LATER

A TEAR FOR THE COMRADES

STILL FLOWS AT SEA

REMEMBER THAT DAY

DON'T EVER FORGET

OUR MEN AND WOMEN

GAVE THEIR LIVES

FOR FREEDOM

IN A COUNTRY SO GREAT

THE UNITED STATES OF AMERICA

JOYE LANGE 11-15-2023

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About the Creator

Joye C Lange

I AM SEVENTY -ONE YEARS OLD, AND LIVE IN OHIO. MY LIFE EXPERIENCES GIVE ME

GREAT JOY TO EXPRESS MYSELF IN PROSE. IN THESE DIFFICULT TIMES WRITING IS

AN INSTRUMENT OF EXPRESSION THAT HELPS HUMANITY.

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  • Joye C Lange (Author)21 days ago

    I HAD THE PRIVLEGE TO GO TO HAWAII AND EXPERIENCE THE LOCATION WHERE THE BOMBS WERE DROPPED. ON THE BEAUTIFUL ISLAND OF OAHU IN HAWAII. I WALKED THE MONUMENT OF THE ARIZONA, AND WHEN THE NARRATOR SAID A TEAR FOR THE COMRADES I IMMEDIATELY KNEW A POEM HAD TO BE WRITTEN. I HOPE IN MY HEART THAT EACH OF YOU WILL ENJOY MY POEM, AND REMEMBER THE MANY WHO SERVED TO SAVE THIS GREAT NATIONS FREEDOM.

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