The story of my life
The story of my life
is walking alone on a road
in the middle of the night
not sure if I can make it home
falling asleep before I get there
waking up in the morning, thinking
the sun was shinning just for me
then going to bed in the afternoon
too drunk to see
~
I have stood on mountain tops
with my arms raised to the sky
after climbing up one side
on scraped and bruised knees
just to watch myself fall
down the other side
~
I have dove in headfirst
without thinking
just so I could
sink to the bottom
let out the breath in my lungs
and start swimming again
~
I have assembled a series of mistakes
wrapped in accomplishments
gifts, I've placed under a
Christmas tree
in the corner of my heart
with lights
blinking off and on
with every beat
~
My past
is a movie
played on a silver screen
where nobody saw the ending
coming....
~
My future
is a blank space
filled with the hopes and dreams
of a place where
nothing's happened
~
My journey
is a curve
heading around a bend
waiting for a straight away
with a Mack truck coming
the wrong way...
~
My biography
is an equation
in a room
of mathematicians working
on white boards to solve it
when no one's told them
the solution is undefined
~
My epic
is a tale of adventure
written in a book, read by a librarian
to class of children, sitting on a rug
about a man who keeps choosing
his own path
no matter how far it leads him astray
~
My footsteps
are an odyssey
of a lost traveler
who has stumbled into a hole, fallen down
cried out for help, gotten back up, crawled
out of the hole, and thrown themselves
back down again
~
My spirit
is an old race car driver
racing long after his prime
refusing to believe his best days are gone
telling himself in every turn
he can still win
~
My wisdom
is an old hippie saying
"Moderation in everything, man"
and a terminally ill patient who
truly understands what it means
to never give up....
~
My adversity
is a cloud chasing a dream
across a blue sky on the edge of a storm
threatening to overtake a tranquil sun
shinning on the eve of an angry moon
when a hurricane is coming in the night
then standing in the aftermath
underneath an early morning light
thankful to be alive
~
My moral
is a line
from a Robert Frost poem
about a road not taken, and a
quote from a Maya Angelou
book about a caged bird
that still sings.
~
My conclusion
is the memories I leave behind
the lessons I teach my children
the love I will be remembered
for.
About the Creator
The Invisible Writer
"Poetry is what happens when nothing else can"
Charles Bukowski
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Comments (40)
I really love your use of simile in poem, it made your message relatable and compelling! My favourite stanza was βMy past is a movie played on a silver screenβ because it felt so relatable to me. I feel like a lot of people often replay their failures and successes in their head, kind of like a movie. Or at least I do, so this part really caught my attention. You created such a beautiful, well thought out piece TIW!
That was incredible. You really spanned an amazing range of things in life, all rolled into one experience. So amazing!
love it
Love this! Very inspiring. I relate to this piece in many ways.
Well written, great piece
Very deep
Each stanza added something new and meaningful! So many beautiful lines. Well done!
I love this.
This poem tells a story of a journey filled with highs and lows, mistakes and accomplishments, and ultimately, a message of perseverance and hope.
This is so beautifully written!
Beautifully crafted! Again Congrats for it should be on top most of Top story.
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It's times like these when I'm so proud of my decision to join Vocal. This was truly an outstanding piece of art. It deserves to go places beyond Vocal. Very well done. π₯
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Outstanding Writing!!Congrats!
Very well articulated. Congrats
I don't know why I didn't read this sooner. Every stanza struck with ever increasing force and I was rapt in the rhythm. You earned yourself a β€οΈ and subscription, my friend.
Thank you, well written
Congrats on the well-deserved top story
Great piece of work. Heartfelt and sincere.
Congrats! Love it π
This gripped my heart all the way through. The nod to Robert Frostβs βThe Road Not Takenβ was particularly tuggingβ¦ the anniversary of the death of someone I love is coming up and that poem was made into book marks and given out at his funeral.
I loooovvveeeee this
I cannot locate the emoji for standing ovation but when I do I'll swap it out. That was so well done πππ
Amusing. Congrats