The Space Between
What remains after someone leaves

At the shrine gate,
one pair of sandals
waits in the rain.
No footsteps.
Only the red of the torii
darkening with water.
At the station,
the last train leaves
without a goodbye.
One seat remains warm.
No one sits there.
The announcement says
something I cannot understand,
then becomes silent.
In the old house,
there are six cushions
around the table.
Five cups of tea.
One untouched.
The steam disappears
slowly,
as if it has somewhere
else to go.
In spring,
the cherry trees bloom
without asking who is watching.
Petals fall
onto an empty bicycle.
One petal.
Another.
Then the whole path
is covered with things
that used to be flowers.
My grandmother's room
still smells of incense.
Her clock stopped
at 3:17.
Nobody has repaired it.
Nobody wants to.
Sometimes,
in the evening,
I think I hear her
sliding open the door.
I don't turn around.
There are some sounds
that become smaller
when you name them.
At the summer festival,
lanterns float above the street.
Children laugh.
Taiko drums echo
between the houses.
But there is one place
where nobody stands.
One space
between two people.
One empty place
where a hand
could have been held.
The music continues.
The fireworks rise.
For a moment,
the entire sky is filled with light.
And then—
nothing.
No firework.
No sound.
Only smoke
slowly disappearing
into the night.
Perhaps this is what we call absence:
not an empty room,
but the shape
someone left behind.
Not silence,
but the sound
that should have come next.
Not forgetting,
but remembering
without saying the name.
So I leave the door open.
I leave one cup
on the table.
I leave one space
beside me
on the train.
Not because I expect
someone to return.
But because some things
are too important
to fill.
And sometimes,
the emptiness
is the only place
where they can still exist.
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Takashi Nagaya
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