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The Soldier's Command

A fantasy of discipline and obedience

By Jeremy BrowerPublished 4 years ago • 1 min read
The Soldier's Command
Photo by Obed Hernández on Unsplash

He stood at attention, with a rifle in hand,

His uniform crisp, and his stance so grand.

I couldn't help but stare, at his strength and his might,

And I longed to obey, his every command tonight.

With a stern voice, he ordered me to strip,

And I obeyed without hesitation, my body quivering with each rip.

He took control, and I gave in purely,

To the soldier's command, and the pleasure it brings fully.

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Jeremy Brower

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    Written by Jeremy Brower