The Snapper and My Confidence
Still Lurking
Do you know? I don't think of you,
In the moments I remember you,
So much as a person anymore. You've
Transformed. Not from a dragonfly nymph,
Readily-pincered, only to become beautiful
As an adult. Winged, still dangerously predatorial, but now
Convincing of a more palatable, presentable, flitting image.
This is not you. You are an alligator snapping turtle
In the water, sinking under new memories but expectantly open-mouthed,
Offering your tongue-turned-worm to catch my attention and my
Nascent freedom from you in your jaws again.
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Hannah E. Aaron
Hello! I'm mostly a writer of fiction and poetry that tend to involve nature, family, and the idea of growth at the moment. Otherwise, I'm a reader, crafter, and full-time procrastinator!
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The imagery you use to describe the transformation of the person is both captivating and unsettling. It's a powerful piece that leaves a lasting impression. Well done!💕🥰👏
This was so relatable! I've been unfortunate to have met and been with a alligator snapping turtle. So sorry you've experienced it too. I loved your acrostic! Subscribed to you as well!
I’m curious. Who is the alligator? Is your first part of your poem an attempt to transform the alligator? What does the first part of the poem represent? Should there be a bigger dance between your sentiments and the alligator’s jaws?
This is excellent. Spot-on. ❤
Awesome Piece📝✨❤️Congratulations on your Top Story🎉✨🎯💯
Wow! This is so stunning with so many layers. I found myself reading this poem over again just for the joy of soaking it all up. ❤️ Your language is beautiful, poetic, and evocative. Simply gorgeous work. Congratulations on your Top Story, and good luck in the challenge!
Congratulations on your Top Story. Well done.