
So it seems that all poetry submissions on this platform need to be 100 words or more. I wrote this poem a while ago, and it would defiantly NOT let me improve upon it, so I will just take a few words to preface it here.
Have you ever edged your way to the rim of a cliff and tentatively peeked over? Or perhaps walked right up to an egregiously tall object, like a sky scraper, or even just a telephone pole, and look straight up along its length? Do you remember how your stomach gibed and jumped at the mere thought of all that space to fall into?
This was the feeling I always had when looking up into the sky as a kid, at summer swim practice or sunbathing in random fields, and even when I just pondered the concept of the infinite. The simple imagination of it terrified me. The sheer gall of that excruciating emptiness.
I tried to capture the feeling here and communicate it. I also paired it with NASA's famous Pale Blue Dot, a picture of our gorgeous home falling through deep heaven like a dust mote in a sunbeam. I found it eerily fitting, and I hope you can taste it too.
The Sky's Blue
When I was a child,
I spoke like a child,
I thought like a child,
I reasoned like a child,
And the infinitude
Of the sky's blue
Overwhelmed
And scared me.
Because it was
So perfect
And went on and on
Forever
And I was scared
(I knew)
That I could float into that blue
And what if it turned black?
About the Creator
John Hein Nystrom
As a veterinary student and poet, I inhale wonder like it's oxygen. Existence is beautiful, ridiculous, tragic, and breathtaking. There is poetry in every dust mote and meaning in every phenomenon. Our worth and absurdity are profound.
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