The Shape That Stayed
Negative Space challenge entry

On a walk in the wilderness
a long, translucent and scaly encasement is found in the thick brush.
As you happen upon its dazzling design
you falter and step back,
carefully observing
for movement that never comes.
Eye caps that remain intact
but purposeless.
The diamond shape
that extends
into a cylindrical tube
that stretches
then tapers at the end.
Open and detached
it is cavernous
but sits flat
and holds no weight.
Fear turns to fascination
as you pick up a twig,
snapped from some storm-battered branch,
and gently lift the skin.
Crouching for a closer look,
flipping what remains to reveal
the glistening jeweled exterior.
Perfect in its imitation
of what was
and what was left behind.
With the sleeve of your hoodie or sweater
you lift the empty skin jacket
and note
the lifeless eye caps,
gently holding them to the sunlight
as it reaches down between the trees
to reveal
The window to nothing.
And the mouth
you imagined fierce
moments before
is now a gap
of no consequence.
The long hollow tube
that once held prey
is now a footprint
of appetite
and survival.
Yes—muscle, hunger
now struggles
to hold itself
as you let it lie
on the dirt and the grass.
You trace gently the opening,
carefully,
with a measure of respect,
as your finger caresses
the dry paper-like surface,
following its winding length
till you come to the tail.
As you gaze and ponder,
your hands straighten the casing
into an imitation of life.
But it falls flat.
So you ease just a finger,
one solitary digit
into the opening,
filling and giving weight
to what remains.
It is fuller now.
No more alive.
You gently retract your finger
from the shed skin
and it collapses
just as easily
as it had done before.
In that moment you also notice
the absence.
No hiss.
No slither.
Do you make the sound
just to give the silence
something to hold
or accept the absence?
Imitation is not resurrection.
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Paul Stewart
Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.
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