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The Scurry

a poem

By Ella ValentinePublished 2 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - March 2024
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The Scurry
Photo by Shifaaz shamoon on Unsplash

The tips of your hair soak up

Your spine melts at the vision of me, you want to tell me everything; show me everything about this world as if I haven’t lived,

without constraints

you steal into my most shameful fantasies and you never dismay

Your naked and dying thoughts cling to every bit of me you can get a hold of before you notice me noticing you and scurry away

I imagine you wrapped up in my skin

Holding on

Present

in every shiver I feel, every spasm of my soul

It doesn’t matter where you are

You’ve traveled the world just to learn we’re nothing

Ripe and heavy,

We jump from a sunny rooftop to a red carpet

and another

Showing off our pretty smiles - do we expect to be worshipped or are we just hanging out?

As time goes by, the whip-crack of the years, our irrational impulses, unspeakable emotions bottle up and never dare to explode

⁃ we are defeated in our prime -

And I dream; and I dream…

you’re still holding onto me.

heartbreak
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About the Creator

Ella Valentine

A poet and screenwriter based between NYC, LA and London. I'd love to connect with fellow creatives - feel free to reach out to me!

Twitter: @_EllaValentine

Instagram: ella.vn

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  • Manisha Dhalani2 months ago

    Amazing poetry.

  • angela hepworth2 months ago

    the last three lines sent a chill down my spine. this is beautiful work

  • ROCK 2 months ago

    You were a gem to discover tonight, in Sweden just before I sleep. New subscriber and very impressed. I am captivated by your ability to reveal the nakedness in all of us.

  • Anthony Chan2 months ago

    Wow! Your words came to life in this great work!

  • Brin J.2 months ago

    "You've traveled the world just to learn we're nothing," When I read that line, I translate it to mean that their existence is nothing more than a shallow instant, occupying only a fraction of their time on earth. This was very poetic, intimate, and evocative.

  • Kodah2 months ago

    Beautiful poem💌Congrats on top story!! 💝

  • Congratulations on your top story !

  • Hannah Moore2 months ago

    For some reason, I feel like this is about the sea.

  • A. J. Schoenfeld2 months ago

    Wonderfully written. Your imagery was intoxicating. Favorite line: "As time goes by, the whip-crack of the years, our irrational impulses, unspeakable emotions bottle up and never dare to explode"

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