The Sculptor
Each day is a
punctilious, patient punch
of hammer and chisel.
By night, I sift through the drizzle
of dust and pebbles
as conscious thought ebbs
out again to whatever
weird place from whence it flows.
The blows struck
by these tools I've chosen to carry
spare nary a flaw
and suffer no parry
or counter
ere their nightly withdraw.
The hands of an artisan
care little for partisan
petulance —
who are you,
really,
right here and now?
What weaknesses crowd the corners
of your character?
Do barracks in your brain
house biased brutes
who would constrain,
with boots on necks,
any honest reflection
or original thought?
Strike there!
Reduce your preconceptions
to rubble.
Chip away at troublesome
partiality
and double down on your desire
for a blissful reality.
Layer after layer
of ancient rock
blocks off a beautiful picture
underneath —
the stricture of ourselves
beneath these shells
which have built up
deals far more damage
than we're, at first,
willing to credit.
Now, we can make
our subtle edits,
or we can smash the thing
wide open.
There's room for
amicable disparity.
What matters most
is the clarity
of your vision —
who is the person that you're sculpting?
For what do they strive?
I may, at this point,
be an ugly,
half-carven hunk of stone,
but boy,
does the project
make me feel alive.
About the Creator
Jacob Sherman
The desire to read, and perhaps to write, should be cultivated and nurtured with care throughout every stage of life. For my part I will inject what strangeness and truth that I can into our written history. Expect no constants but honesty.
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