The Sandman's Dance
A night's dreams
The sandman is dancing again
my mind weary, my eyes heavy
deeper I go, legs churning, arms swimming
blackness surrounding, I sink down
in the land of dreams.
Wind brushes cold against my cheek
my arms stretch out from my sides
my feet balance on the ledge
rising just above the roof
buildings trail off into the horizon
trees in a concrete jungle
my body leans forward, I swan dive
into the city air, ground below, sky above
I fall.
I know why the caged bird sings,
why the falling man doesn’t scream
freedom of mind is the last taken.
How will it feel when concrete collides
with collagen, and calcium phosphate?
I distract my fate with a lyric
Blue skies, nothing but blue skies
smiling at me...
Running, my feet beat a steady rhythm
against poured asphalt, anxiety pulses
in every beat of muscle inside my chest
a mix of water and salt dampen my body
I push for speed, for time to slow, I am gliding
floating above my feet, a rocket across land
thundering to reverse the clock's hands,
to quiet the thoughts SHOUTING,
you’re late
almost there, destination ahead, you have arrived
blank eyes staring, heads turning, fingers pointing
hands on knees, breaths heaving, I am exhausted
looking down, my naked body glares back at me
rosy red appears on placid cheeks, heat flushes on skin
I am an inferno of mortified humiliation wrapped in shame
laughs, giggles, chuckles, I WANT TO Disappear
vanish, never be born, please....PLEASE
make this go away.
Her hand, slips inside mine, she leads me
across summer fields, a glare of sunlight
partially obscures the blue in her irises as
she glances back over her shoulder
my heart flutters
with each smile she gives, blades of grass
tickle at my legs, as she takes me further
the calm water of a lake grows near in the distance
arriving at it's shore, she takes both my hands in hers
granules of sand press warm between my toes
she looks at me then leans back arching her chin up
we move without speaking turning in circles
her face points to the sky, her gaze on the heavens
her hair falling down beneath her
almost touching the ground
we spin, our arms outstretched
the scent of her perfume, vanilla with lavender
floats in the air
a breeze blows in off the water
leaves rustle on tree limbs
Why do birds suddenly appear
every time you are near
Karen Carpenter, sings on a radio
Just like me, they long to be, close to you
we stop turning, our bodies gravitating
magnetic forces drawing closer, my eyes search hers
our lips closer, my mouth dry, the world
fading away.
Hot breath, putrid with sulfur
steams through the dark, a monster is
emerging from a black abyss, Fe fi fo fum
a GIANT is smelling my blood.
Crows fly across a darkening sky
black specks on a visceral night
vultures cover every inch of earth
spreading out in every direction
blocking any possible escape
I look on in horror as
hooked beaks pick tender morsels,
of everything I have ever known
death envelopes my existence
I turn at the sound of a demon approaching,
a hellscape sweeps red hot fire across my skin
my fists close tight, I will die fighting
my demon appears out of Hell’s depths
long sinuated muscles stretch across
limbs culminating in clawed hands and hooved feet
hot air rises from nostrils, caverns in a horned skull
jagged teeth gnash, blades in an elongated snout
my demon comes.
The sandman is dancing tonight
to bring you fright or delight
I must wake up, I must open my eyes
before The Sandman's song, traps me
with an endless sleep
hurry, climb higher, my voice narrates
inside my mind, quickly now
before the demon takes hold.
My room appears, my conscious heavy
I drift between sleep and waking,
the dream still fresh in my mind
The Sandman slowly releases me back
I sit from my bed, to look out my window
wishing I was still by the lake.
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"Poetry is what happens when nothing else can"
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Comments (12)
Wow talk about a dream worth interpreting! There is so much to absorb and ponder from they journey you took us on Will! It was ethereal, melancholic and magical. I love the places you took us with this one!
Wow! This one was all over the place. So much depth and so much to ponder. Dreams are our subconscious trying to say something.
Woah. That was so fun and intense.
< New Subscriber! This is such an experience to read! It's meter is perfect and your grasp of imagery is impeccable! I LOVE this!!
Ahh loved this!!! I really enjoyed the reference to Jack and the bean stalk with fe fi fo fum :)
Very good, iiked the song quotes, i do that too They fit in with the poem perfectly
Wow! This was vivid with a good amount of intensity. Loved it!
Whoaaaa, my head's spinning, lol! That was one heck of a ride! I loved it!
Oh my. What a ride! Very well done.
Great job!
This is awesome! Definitely a wild and crazy ride! Beautiful at the same time. Well done!
Holy cow!! That was a crazy rollercoaster!! I have music in my dreams too. Great entry for the challenge :)