your fragrance invited me to admire your beauty,
as the buzzing bee sounds a bit moody,
your sweet nectar,
which he has gathered,
remind my tastebuds ,
of honey’s golden matter,
I reach for you,
your velvety skin,
I touch you once,
and then again;
your stem supports,
a striking pose,
protected by thorns,
my beautiful rose.
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Moe Radosevich
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A rose like a lot in life is beauty with a bit of pain Soft petals with hard thorns. loved this Moe
Lovely words, I wish I could write poetry
I love roses. Could not resist this poem for sure, nicely done ❤️🌹
Such beautiful penned words!
🌹 Beautiful Moe 🌹
Fabulous!!!💖💖💕
Nice ❤️😉💯✨
Very well done!
Well, buddy, this one is very literally sensual and very well penned. A great challenge entry!