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The Rose

Senses Aware

By Moe RadosevichPublished 5 months ago 1 min read
The Rose
Photo by Aleza van der Werff on Unsplash

your fragrance invited me to admire your beauty,

as the buzzing bee sounds a bit moody,

your sweet nectar,

which he has gathered,

remind my tastebuds ,

of honey’s golden matter,

I reach for you,

your velvety skin,

I touch you once,

and then again;

your stem supports,

a striking pose,

protected by thorns,

my beautiful rose.

Thank you for reading,

nature poetry

About the Creator

Moe Radosevich

I am always touched when something I write touches another so if any of you my fellow creators have been touched thank you

Write on my friends

Sure would appreciate more reads and maybe some tips or pledges thank you

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  • The Invisible Writer5 months ago

    A rose like a lot in life is beauty with a bit of pain Soft petals with hard thorns. loved this Moe

  • Lovely words, I wish I could write poetry

  • Mariann Carroll5 months ago

    I love roses. Could not resist this poem for sure, nicely done ❤️🌹

  • Such beautiful penned words!

  • C. H. Richard5 months ago

    🌹 Beautiful Moe 🌹

  • Babs Iverson5 months ago


  • Nice ❤️😉💯✨

  • Cendrine Marrouat5 months ago

    Very well done!

  • Dana Crandell5 months ago

    Well, buddy, this one is very literally sensual and very well penned. A great challenge entry!

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