The Rats Keep Score
Villanelle.
Behold the man deserving of sackcloth
Whose modesty, façade is stripped bare
Picked apart by the rats and the moth
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He who hides in shadows from wroth
Avoiding the onlookers as they stare
Behold the man deserving of sackcloth
~
Who runs from battle in fear and loth
Falling dick first into a tempting snare
Picked apart by the rats and the moth
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As he sits and rots against his Taharoth
Placing blame elsewhere - Life's not fair
Behold the man deserving of sackcloth
~
With skin flayed by the scythe-like swath
Is his tortured mind beyond repair
Picked apart by the rats and the moth
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But redemption is possible through troth
As his fragility is exposed, flesh bare
Behold the man deserving of sackcloth
Picked apart by the rats and the moth
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Author's Notes: The only notes I am going to give is some help with understanding the meaning of words you may be less familiar with.
- wroth — anger, alternative spelling to wrath
- loth — reluctant, unwilling, alternative spelling to loathe
- taharoth — state of ritual purity
- swath — a broad strip or mown row of crops/grass, alternative spelling to swathe
- troth — a solemn vow of fidelity, in a marital context
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Paul Stewart
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