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The Rats Keep Score

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By Paul StewartPublished 10 months ago • Updated 10 months ago • 1 min read
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The Rats Keep Score
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Behold the man deserving of sackcloth

Whose modesty, façade is stripped bare

Picked apart by the rats and the moth

~

He who hides in shadows from wroth

Avoiding the onlookers as they stare

Behold the man deserving of sackcloth

~

Who runs from battle in fear and loth

Falling dick first into a tempting snare

Picked apart by the rats and the moth

~

As he sits and rots against his Taharoth

Placing blame elsewhere - Life's not fair

Behold the man deserving of sackcloth

~

With skin flayed by the scythe-like swath

Is his tortured mind beyond repair

Picked apart by the rats and the moth

~

But redemption is possible through troth

As his fragility is exposed, flesh bare

Behold the man deserving of sackcloth

Picked apart by the rats and the moth

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Author's Notes: The only notes I am going to give is some help with understanding the meaning of words you may be less familiar with.

  • wroth — anger, alternative spelling to wrath
  • loth — reluctant, unwilling, alternative spelling to loathe
  • taharoth — state of ritual purity
  • swath — a broad strip or mown row of crops/grass, alternative spelling to swathe
  • troth — a solemn vow of fidelity, in a marital context

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Paul Stewart

Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.

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    Written by Paul Stewart