Son,
You can’t finish a race that you are afraid to run. You have already lost before the race has begun.
Dad
About the Creator
John M Edwards Jr
Born in San Francisco, CA. Son of a preacher. After committing my life to Jesus Christ, I noticed the letter I wrote to God had rhyming lines. That became my first poem.
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Comments (3)
Yes, it's all in the mind! Great message.
This was so deep and true! I loved it!
Nice message ❤️😉💯