The Pull of Water
A Poem by Keila Aartila
I am fascinated by wild water,
the great power of it’s rhythmical sound,
yet remain terrified that I might drown.
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My dreams float colorful on the current,
carried to generations yet unfound.
I am fascinated by wild water.
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From the shore, my limited time is spent
on this relentless course to which I’m bound,
yet remain terrified that I might drown.
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To it’s glorious nature, rivers bent,
new paths carved steadily through untamed ground.
I am fascinated by wild water.
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Forever flowing fresh, never stagnant;
by magic moonlight, I am safely crowned,
yet remain terrified that I might drown
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under the weight of wishes sent
to journey upon gentle waves profound.
I am fascinated by wild water
yet remain terrified that I might drown.
About the Creator
KJ Aartila
A writer of words in northern WI with a small family and a large menagerie.
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Outstanding
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Compelling and original writing
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Flawless flow. Congratulations 🎉
This was incredible
Beautiful. Previously read and hearted.
Re-read. Hearted previously!!!