The Path of Totality
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Eroding tireless queries, the layers regenerate, as does the
crustacean's secret.
Lifting one’s head above the horizon, unworthiness acclimates;
intimidating the understanding of that which eludes grasp.
Perhaps, intrigue subtracts the splendor from tranquility as
stellar dreams reveal themselves with stark precision. Alignment may be
eventual, but it's the Mother of Totality who brings forth all gifts.
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Lamar Wiggins
Creative writer in the Northeast US who loves the paranormal, mystery, true crime, horror, humor, fantasy and poetry. Take a chance, you'll be thoroughly entertained.
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Final Call
She flings her arms around my neck and squeezes me like she’s never going to let me go. My head spins as her lips brush against my cheek. She must be able to feel my heart thumping in my chest. I shuffle backwards and ram my hands into my coat pockets, watching her reach down and heave the rucksack across her shoulders.
By Caroline Craven7 days ago in Fiction
Comments (13)
Love this concept and so well executed! This left a lovely image in my mind 🤗
Brilliant entry, Lamar!
Great entry, I loved it.
“stellar dreams reveal themselves with stark precision” is a line I liked Lamar, and this made me think about the sun as a powerful force and life-giver.
That was crazy good you may have a winner with this one
Whoaaaa this was so magnificent! Loved your Acrostic!
“stellar dreams reveal themselves with stark precision” Amazing entry! ❤️
I especially loved the line - it's the mother of totality that brings all gifts. It's a powerful statement. Excellent acrostic, Lamar!
A compelling acrostic with a contemplative tone! Very nice!
Well-wrought! Mother of Totality!
I'm sure this is excellent as is all your work, but it's poetry so for me 🤷♂️?
Excellent Take on the Challenge
Quite stunning Lamar, and really powerful celestial feel about it. Great interpretation of the brief.