The Making of a Snow Globe
Poem for "Say it Plainly" challenge
When I was five
I put a quarter
into a toy machine.
A toy soldier was dispensed
in a plastic dome —
perfect for making
a snow globe.
My tiny square cutouts
of fickle foil became
glittering snow that
fell upon the soldier
I put inside.
And when it was filled
with water and shaken,
the soldier seemed too alone.
But potentialities
ran out
of undoings,
and all I could
think about is
what my favorite aunt
would think of this
homemade gift.
Then my father
walked into my
bedroom.
He was drunk (again)
but looked so sad.
So, I gave the
snow globe to him instead.
My father shook it
and told me
we ought to go
s
l
e
d
d
i
n
g
Before we left,
he put the dome
inside his coat
and sobered up
once we got
to the top of the snowy
h
i
l
l.
About the Creator
Paul Aaron Domenick
I write to break the psyche in half. What good are words unless they turn us upside down and shake us?
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