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The Loss

Or the end of a war in a high fantasy universe

By Silver DauxPublished 2 years ago • 1 min read
Top Story - January 2025
The Loss
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Snow touched the pines

Long before the shadow

Of night stretched eagerly

Over the mountains.

.

Stone-blue eyes stared

Across the land, once his own,

Now soiled with blood and ash

And no small amount of death.

.

The empty fight was over.

Enemies and allies, dead.

Their bodies polluted the dirt,

Turned the rivers red.

.

Long strands of black hair,

Curled, wet with blood,

And streaked grey with age

Shifted in the wind.

.

He didn't want this.

There was a body in the sea

Of decaying flesh that should not

Have ever been there.

.

There was a body whose litheness

Belonged in a different grave.

It belonged underneath oak trees

Where it could rot and feed the moss.

.

But war was no picky thing

And it had taken the elegance,

Stripped the passion from its soul

And hollowed out its bones.

.

Cold air struck fiercely against his face.

This was a loss, a colossal failure.

A war won but at the cost

Of something beautiful and ethereal.

.

Something that could not be gained,

Or replicated, or created.

Tears sprung to the darkening eyes.

He'd killed his best friend.

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Silver Daux

Writer of the dark! Think of it like flipping rocks, the weird little stories underneath are my jam and jelly. Jam and butter? Just jam. Absolutely no use of AI in any of my works :)

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    Written by Silver Daux