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The Loop

All it took was a rejection

By Don Anderson IIPublished 4 years ago 1 min read
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Photo by Aliyah Jamous on Unsplash

And then I saw it... I saw the loneliness in his eyes, the unbridled rage that's waiting to break out, the love that he wants but knows that he can't have, the passion he feels but doesn't know what to do with it no matter what he does.

I've seen him walking around with nothing to say his whole life and he tries the best he can but he always gets shit back...

It was all full circle, nothing but a loop, the kind that Tom Cruise was stuck in in Edge of Tomorrow so the best he had to do to change that was to break it and he went his way instead without anyone with him

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Don Anderson II

Movies, memoirs, music lover, graduate of community college, and university

Quiet writer but I'm sure my stories from years ago are still of interest

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