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The Icarus Flaw

yes; but just for a second it was...

By BrenPublished 4 years ago • Updated 4 years ago • 1 min read

what

was he thinking

how high

did he think

he could,

or need;

to go

there was no one

to see

there was no one

to show

the only way

was up

his plan thwarted

by the suns beaming rays

relentless

and not prone

to forgive

the simplest

or most innocent

of mistakes

what do you suppose

his final thoughts

comprised of

as he spiraled

down, down, down

precariously

plummeting

plunging

to his impending demise

i'm sure

most of us would

consider the very same

we all have days

when all we want

is to

get high

and touch

the sun

fact or fictionsurreal poetry

About the Creator

Bren

“I know what I mean it to be and respect that someone else may read something entirely different.” Me

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    Written by Bren