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The Hunter Within

The thing chasing me knew all my failures.

By Tim CarmichaelPublished 3 months ago • 1 min read

Something dark trails my spine.

It stays close, a grim shape that refuses to show itself.

I feel it moving when I move,

stopping when I stop.

The dread is heavy,

pulling at my clothes like a swamp.

Every part of me wants to run,

yet my legs turn to lead.

*

The woods seem deeper,

twisted into shapes that mock my fear.

A cold prickle travels up my back,

telling me I am watched by a thing that hates the light.

I know it waits for a slip,

a stumble,

a moment of weakness.

It feeds on my panic,

enjoying the way I shudder.

*

I keep my eyes front.

If I look,

I will see a horror that defies all sense.

My heart thumps loud in the gloom.

I am trapped in a nightmare

where my own terror acts as the hunter.

No sound comes from the dark.

It is a hungry void,

a presence so thick it burns.

*

I scramble over broken ground,

gasping for life.

The feeling grows worse.

It knows my path.

It knows my failures.

I move forward,

yet this thing stays stuck to my heels,

a curse that will never leave.

*

I am dying a thousand times over,

trapped in the grip of a shadow of my own ruin,

waiting for the final pull

that will drag me into the deep.

*

Every breath feels like a struggle

against a wall of invisible iron.

My mind breaks under the burden of this stare.

I am alone,

hunted by a ghost of my own making,

forever running from the thing

that stalks my misery.

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About the Creator

Tim Carmichael

Let your becoming be louder than your fear, and your smallest steps become the road you once thought impossible to walk. An Appalachian poet and cookbook author my book Beautiful and Brutal Things is on Amazon, Link 👇

https://a.co/d/537XqhW

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    Written by Tim Carmichael