The House Without...
for "negative space" challenge

A house that I could tell you about.
The colour of the door. How it looked inside the kitchen.
The shape of the stairs coming up to your front door.
I could tell you about all of that.
Instead I’ll show you:
A shadow falling across the floorboards.
A picture frame.
A glass that hasn’t been touched since it was placed there.
A jacket hanging from a coat rack.
I’m sure you want me to go on.
Someone to put there.
There was someone.
It’s here that I leave you.
There are things about that home I could tell you about.
The yard before they took down the ivy.
That one song at the grocery store.
I’ll leave that out too.
Take a look at the map I’ve drawn for you.
This is your hallway.
This is your step up to the front door.
This is your coat rack.
I gave you everything about that home.
You took a look around.
You walked through that house slowly, looking for
Someone.
There wasn’t anyone there.
But it still felt warm.
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Edward Smith
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