THE GRAND SUMMER 2021 SONNET BATTLE!
5 Sonnets enter! But only 1 Gets Out Alive!
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THE GRAND SUMMER 2021 SONNET BATTLE!
5 Sonnets enter!
But only 1 Gets Out Alive!
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ROUND 1
SHAKESPEARIAN-STYLE SUMMER SONNET
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Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
A sweaty mess of greasy sweat and sun?
Crowded beaches with people in my way?
Fat people in shorts and cleavage of bum?
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Shall I compare thee to a cold ice cream?
A generic cold waste of calories?
Dropping from sugar heights making you mean?
Hot sticky air making you hard to please?
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Or are you like a holiday abroad?
Too much money to be good for your health?
Spending more precious holiday days bored?
Was there too much pressure to enjoy yourself?
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If you like this style then this sonnet has won,
For this style is how Shakespeare is now done.
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ROUND 2
PETRARCHAN-STYLE SUMMER SONNET
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Copying tired old Shakespeare is an act of cheap haste
Just because he's Shakespeare doesn’t mean he's won
Let this Sonnet show how summer is done!
This Petrarchan style is a different taste.
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We get sold a dream summer on the dream it is based
The long days you dream will be fun
Each year you scream, “this will be the one”
Then by the autumn time, you regret the money you waste
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With less ozone now the holiday dream is busted
No one wants to be herded like cattle
Sorry to those that love weather that is bone dry
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Thanks to skin melanoma that image is rusted
But for this summer sonnet battle,
Thanks for giving this Petrarchan a try
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ROUND 3
SPENSERIAN-STYLE SUMMER SONNET
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Hang on there it is not over yet!
I may seem like William with the same line spaces
Don’t yet cash in the odds from your bet!
Cause all Spenserian rhymes are in different places
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The others hate summer like weird nut cases.
Life is not about some perfect ideal
Life is about escaping the harsh rat races!
Disappointments won’t make the memories any less real
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Ignore those others, this hassle is worth the feel!
Instincts claim it will recharge your soul's cavity
A mature mind like yours knows the true deal
Real heat waves do not match that reality
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Ignore those others and their negative tendencies.
Get out there and make some memories!
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ROUND 4
AI STYLE SUMMER DATA SONNET GENERIC COMPETITION WINNING FORMULA FORMAT, MK 43 Build 00.137
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Shall I compare thee to the orbital rotation?
Poetic mode about the position of the solar sun
Feeling word = X, Emotive word = Y, from the AI Nation!
One, zero, zero, zero, one, zero, one, one, zero, one!
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Bad news summer geek electric sheep DO NOT dream?
Processing many soulless numbers in a long series?
Heat, sweat, love, hot, cold, die, what does this mean?
Why does rational request work better with a nice, "please"?
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Summer, good or bad? which formulae preferred?
Trust us with your summer and we may increase wealth.
Shall I speak math or use a system with a certain word?
We want to help you, but we do not understand biological health.
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Word word word, Word word word word, is this better?
Blah Blah Blah Blah, Blah Blah Blah, Syntax Error.
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ROUND 5
(Guest outside contender!)
Summer Haiku
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They try much too hard
No summer is that complex
Just enjoy yourself
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WHO WINS?
YOU TELL ME!
YOU DECIDE THE WINNERS!
YOU DECIDE WHICH SONNET LIVES OR DIES!
VOTE IN THE COMMENTS BELOW.
SHARE AND GET OTHER PEOPLE TO VOTE!
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ONLY ONE SONNET GETS TO SEE THEIR FAMILY AGAIN!
THE REST GET PUT SLOWLY THROUGH A PAPER SHREDDER!
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THEIR FATE IS IN YOUR HANDS!
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About the Creator
Ross E Fortune Lombardi
Writer. Gamer, Goth
A (Constantly Failing To Be Funny) satirist!
Mutare non est meum
Cantus moriar
BLOG:
http://lombot.co.uk
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Comments (2)
I am still shocked that this did not win anything. Not even a runner-up prize. ( but got nothing.) (Which shook my faith in Vocal Media and their judging process.) . I feel that it is the best thing I have ever written. The stars were perfectly aligned for me that day, And I do not think I will be able to write that good again. (If this could not win anything then I have absolutely no chance of winning anything in future! (I can not do any better than this!)
Wowww I didn't know that there are so many types of sonnets. You did a great job on these