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The Gospel of the Turning Gear

When progress becomes prayer

By Tim CarmichaelPublished 5 months ago • Updated 5 months ago • 1 min read

We organize our days

by the ringing of bells,

sure that the synchronization of our motions

brings us closer to the stars.

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Every step is a careful act of devotion

to the great machine of existence.

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We refine the method of our production,

refining the human spirit

until it shines with the polished brilliance

of a new gear.

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To be efficient is to be holy.

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We categorize the emotions of the heart

into neat, navigable drawers,

ensuring that no stray passion disrupts

the smooth operation of our collective purpose.

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The progress of man is a march toward the divine.

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The gears grind

with the frantic energy of a trapped animal,

yet we applaud the speed of the rotation

as if it were a prayer.

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We have built a cathedral

of iron and cogs,

where the congregation prays

to the efficiency of the assembly line.

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We watch the clock

with religious fervor,

terrified that a moment wasted

might signify a lapse in our cosmic duty.

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We have successfully automated

the pursuit of enlightenment,

reducing the transcendental journey

to a series of predictable, repeatable actions.

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The progress of man is a march toward the divine.

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At the end of the line,

the machine delivers a product

that is perfectly formed,

completely hollow,

and utterly useless.

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We stare at the result

of our frantic devotion,

perplexed by the absence of the soul

we were promised.

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The gears have turned exactly as planned,

yet the universe remains blissfully unaware

of our monumental achievement.

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We stand in the wreckage

of our own optimization,

realizing that the shortest path to heaven

has led us directly to a graveyard

of discarded cogs.

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The progress of man is a march toward the divine.

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About the Creator

Tim Carmichael

Let your becoming be louder than your fear, and your smallest steps become the road you once thought impossible to walk. An Appalachian poet and cookbook author my book Beautiful and Brutal Things is on Amazon, Link 👇

https://a.co/d/537XqhW

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    Written by Tim Carmichael