The Girl With Lavender Eyes
Long may her legacy live
There once was a girl with lavender eyes
Who strode the world’s thorny paths with ethereal grace,
Sorrow's desperate scars permanently etched
In the lines cut deep upon her face.
A simple glance from her entrancing orbs
Could capture the greatest of pain,
Imprisoning agony and absorbing misery’s tortuous grip
Till the weary soul could breathe again.
A simple tap from her outstretched finger
Could eviscerate the darkest thought,
Freeing each mind from the hopeless anguish
That years of trauma wrought.
Many a widow’s tear-stained skin
Was dried by her delicate kiss upon their cheek,
And her soft hum brought to each insomniac
The peaceful surrender they desperately seek.
She could dull a soldier’s scrambled senses
And ease the burden of lost loved ones that they bore.
She stole the pain that laced the limbs
Of those reduced to gore.
The ancient world could rest its sleepy head
Wrapped cozy in the contentment she brought its many lands.
Discomfort and torment stood no chance
Against her caring, tender hands.
But alas, one day, a nuke’s fiery blast
And the resultant echoes of destruction and dismay,
Proved more than our sweet heroine could handle
As she fell victim to the explosive fray.
Into fragments the paragon's beauty broke,
Swept into the winds of reverberated tragedy.
The stiff breeze scattered particles far and wide,
Blowing away the evidence of her mortality.
And today her traces can still be found
Though less evident to the beholder,
In the wrinkles of long digits
Grasped comfortingly around a heaving shoulder,
In the gentle crushing of a sympathetic stranger's
Slightly too-tightly wrapped arms,
In the healing laughter of a bubbly infant
Too young to realize its charms,
In the taut knit of carefully woven linen bandages
Wrapped lovingly across ugly scars,
And in the perfectly calming beauty
Of a symphony of stars.
About the Creator
Kat Thorne
Just muddling through life, trying to be the good sort of chaotic energy.
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One of the best poems I’ve read in recent memory. An incredible, almost lyrical flow, paired with vivid imagery and wonderful word choice. Equal parts haunting and beautiful.
Beautiful and evocative! 💕🙂
That was stunningly beautiful, loved it :)
Entrapment beauty , felt sadness reading this poem .
Wow! This was so breathtaking! Every line was so beautiful! Gosh, your poem is so gorgeous! I loved it!
Beautifully written!
This is a special kind of good. Loved it.
Impressive!!! Loving the lavender with its calming scent. 💖😊💕
This is beautiful. Well done.
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