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The Girl in Question

Anytown, USA

By Edward SwaffordPublished 2 months ago • Updated 2 months ago • 1 min read
Runner-Up in Static Challenge
QUESTIONING. Image by Jayson Hinrichsen from Pexels.

Identical same/same/same signal denier days

She’s an abject construct of apathetic context

"All the boys love Kaylee-Anne”

Yet in this slipshod town, love is lost on trust

Perhaps they love hard a little too much¿?¿

Androgyny only shields her at surface level

Because flesh-deep beauty and so-so-supple skin

Are the rarest, restless commodities, and silence

SPEAKS: take a keen cut from her, she’s so easy!

An evergreen, always-virginal breeze, it’s like

The ultimate palette cleanser for budding

Been-there-done-her-she’ll-sate-until-college

Static subtypes, every midwestern shithole

Claims the same consent-phobic jocks lining

Up for licks of innermost, intimate, innocent

Double-digit fingers nailing her peony prize

Why does she smell so fucking sweet¿?¿?

Blame it on booze or "PeEr PrEsSuRe"...but

She’ll always remember, while this traduced

Town churns copycat scenarios sans a care

(c) Edward Swafford 2026

QUESTIONABLE. Image by Jayson Hinrichsen from Pexels.

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Edward Swafford

Hello! I'm an Australian writer and healthcare professional. I've written on Medium for over three years, run Black Coffee Creative on Substack (over 1000 subscribers), with select work published in lit mags 😴.

Edgy syntax is my bailiwick.

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    Written by Edward Swafford