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The Getaway

Lantern Light Challenge

By Angie the Archivist šŸ“ššŸŖ¶Published about a year ago • 1 min read
The Getaway
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Canvas crumples; ropes entangle; tempers f r a y

Our tent smells stale, dusty, musty

Packed away for aeons…we’re rusty

Erecting the darn thing fills us with dismay.

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Indispensable tent poles and pegs go missing missing

Pesky pegs wobble, bounce and bend

As the hammer ascends and descends

Rocks and roots provoke under-the-breath hissing.

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Unpleasant tension steadily mounts

A languid Sun heads off to bed

Shadows s t r e t c h, grow ever l o n g e r

As dreaded Dusk threatens to pounce.

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At last, our flimsy ā€˜mansion’ is erected on high

ā€œAll hands on deck… empty the car boot

Ferry clothes, bedding, lantern and foodā€

We mop our brows, ā€œJust in the nick of time!ā€ we sigh.

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I slip away unnoticed for a twilight stroll

Along the silent silver shore

A light breeze wafts salty vapour

Crickets chirp, fireflies flicker… time for my bedroll.

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Grotesque shapes dance in a shadow puppet display

A comedic live ā€˜movie’ on flapping canvas walls

Voices murmur as laughter rises and falls

Amidst it all, the lone lantern swings and sways.

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Like a moth irresistibly drawn to firey flame

That lantern’s light pulls me ever near

To my family, oh so very dear

The tent flap yawns wide, swallows my weary frame.

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The manic mayhem has long since departed

Gentle snores whiffle while sleeping bags rustle

Our creaking tent’s free from all signs of bustle

Golden lantern light soothes, leaves me warm-hearted.

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Written for the Lantern Light Challenge.

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Angie the Archivist šŸ“ššŸŖ¶

Labradorā€˜s personalityšŸ•ā€šŸ¦ŗā€¦ attention span of a gnat! šŸ™ƒ

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    Written by Angie the Archivist šŸ“ššŸŖ¶