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The Generous Gift

Time

By Marie Cadette Pierre-LouisPublished about a year ago 1 min read
The Generous Gift
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We despise life’s generous gift

Smack them around and laugh

They can’t make the pain go away

We smile as we look into their eyes

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Our mind craves crime

Time is the easiest to sacrifice

We starve them to death

But expect they’ll forever serve as slave

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As our time vanishes

Life learns to cry

Whispering for help

Begging for our attention

But we continue to smile

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Our spirit’s from life

And our time is life’s brain being squandered

When we ask them for more stamina

Life will cry us demons instead

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a year ago

    This was so deep and emotional! Very beautifully written!

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