We despise life’s generous gift
Smack them around and laugh
They can’t make the pain go away
We smile as we look into their eyes
***
Our mind craves crime
Time is the easiest to sacrifice
We starve them to death
But expect they’ll forever serve as slave
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As our time vanishes
Life learns to cry
Whispering for help
Begging for our attention
But we continue to smile
***
Our spirit’s from life
And our time is life’s brain being squandered
When we ask them for more stamina
Life will cry us demons instead
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This was so deep and emotional! Very beautifully written!