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The Forge

And the Blacksmith

By Silver DauxPublished 2 years ago • 1 min read
The Forge
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I can see the angles of your form

Lodged inside the molten metal,

Banging on it's orange-white surface.

What an affronting sound,

The last pitted effort of the soul

Attempting to escape the custom shackles

Built out of metal and spite and grief.

I am used to this sound.

.

The Blacksmith of Dreams

Would be rubbish if he couldn't

Pick out the whispering plea

Of the soul inside the metal cage.

I am good at my job but better

At choosing the fate of foolish men.

Are you ready, I wonder,

To receive the final shaping blow

And succumb to the future I've made?

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Silver Daux

Writer of the dark! Think of it like flipping rocks, the weird little stories underneath are my jam and jelly. Jam and butter? Just jam. Absolutely no use of AI in any of my works :)

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    Written by Silver Daux