The floor is Lava
My kids favorite game
By The Invisible WriterPublished about a year ago • 1 min read
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The floor is lava
molten flames, rivers of steam
stay safe, feet off ground
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The Invisible Writer
"Poetry is what happens when nothing else can"
Charles Bukowski
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Comments (5)
I think there are juvenile single celled creatures in primordial soup on planets billions of miles away who play this game 😁 that's how universal it is!
I've always loved this game, it's a game I play with my students at school often!! But I do it to this song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wbNAiN8FTfc
Love the image and the words and you now have a new subscriber
This was fantastic! I loved it! 💖
I like it... Great job ⭐⭐⭐