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The floor is Lava

My kids favorite game

By The Invisible WriterPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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The floor is lava

molten flames, rivers of steam

stay safe, feet off ground

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The Invisible Writer

"Poetry is what happens when nothing else can"

Charles Bukowski

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  • L.C. Schäferabout a month ago

    I think there are juvenile single celled creatures in primordial soup on planets billions of miles away who play this game 😁 that's how universal it is!

  • Donna Fox (HKB)9 months ago

    I've always loved this game, it's a game I play with my students at school often!! But I do it to this song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wbNAiN8FTfc

  • Love the image and the words and you now have a new subscriber

  • This was fantastic! I loved it! 💖

  • Rick Henry Christopher about a year ago

    I like it... Great job ⭐⭐⭐

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