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the floating dimension

cornered in space

By Yasmin Ben-DavidPublished 11 days ago 1 min read
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the floating dimension
Photo by Tim Foster on Unsplash

the four walls, the fine

lines. the contours, the size. the

way you blow my mind

it’s the place to be

the place to be alive. the

sun, islands, the wild

i dreamed the Earth was

Me. i looked down and there was

nothing underneath

how do I feel so

confined, when it’s only as

big as I can think?

nature poetry
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Nice work

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    Niche topic & fresh perspectives

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  • Zac Oberg11 days ago

    I appreciate how you're experimenting with the structure of a senryū, keep it up!

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