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The First Time I Captained Our Boat

A poem about the water ahead of me as I captained our family pontoon boat on the Great Sacandaga Lake for the first time.

By Maddy NewtPublished about a year ago • Updated about a year ago • 1 min read

The wings of white caps surround me,

blowing kisses of froth and foam to the wind,

the bubbling specks sparkling in the beam of

setting Sun over the surrounding peaks.

As the pontoons cut through the glassy surface

and the thunder of the motor carries for miles,

our vessel is trailed by a shadowy wake,

robbed of the glittery brilliance of the Sun-kissed front.

But the wake ripples outward

leaving behind a trail

of gentle rolling mounds that eventually

catch the last of the glowing red rays.

As the Sun disappears,

our music swells and my spirits soar,

and I watch with quiet satisfaction

as the last of the disturbed water meets the shore.

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Maddy Newt

I'm a Stony Brook University graduate and production services manager for the NYS Assembly. Writing is one of my passions and Vocal has been a great creative outlet for me.

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    Written by Maddy Newt