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The Failing Body

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By Moe RadosevichPublished about a year ago 1 min read
The Failing Body
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in that moment when we acknowledge that which we have realized for some time, we find,

dreams are disappearing,

hope is fading like the setting sun.

we have endured the day, we made another sunset,

will we witness the next sunrise?

the body knows,

the mind denies,

we see it with failing eyes.

functionality has stopped functioning,

quality has escaped the abundant quantity,

we contemplate the “what if’s”,

foresaking the “for sure’s” along our journey,

time continues,

leaving those behind who can’t maintain,

strain to understand your current state of being,

evaluate your expectations,

be certain of choices,

be strong in your weakness,

being wise with wisdom stimulates the conviction of determination.

high winds today have blown the dust off of the goofy mind, so here it is, hot off the brain,

Thanks for reading.

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Comments (6)

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    Omg, this is evoked so many feelings. Very, very well done. 🥹

  • Dana Crandellabout a year ago

    Holy moly, buddy! You blew the doors off that one! Excellent!

  • This was so deep, profound and thought provoking! Very beautifully written!

  • Grz Colmabout a year ago

    Good one! 👍

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Wonderful, pensive. Very well done.

  • Donna Reneeabout a year ago

    Deep thoughts today!! I love this.

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