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The Eclipse Got Stuck

It’s Been Three Days

By Mariann CarrollPublished 28 days ago 1 min read
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The Eclipse Got Stuck
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Oh no, the moon ate the sun! How is that possible?

On the eve of the eclipse, the moon remain covering the sun. It stayed the way for three days. People had their own different theory of this phenomenon.

God is angry so it the sign of the end of time. Others say no it’s a cosmic phenomenon. Which is it, the confused people of the earth thought? An Alien has penetrated our earth and come to invade it.

This is not new, part of the earth is cover in darkness for three days. The scientists say the earth, moon and sun shifted. Only God know why this happen.

Some people prayed hard and give offerings to the heavens, that’s why the darkness lifted.

What will you come up with if the eclipse lasted three days?

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About the Creator

Mariann Carroll

Proactive for positive change.Born in the City of Chicago ,Illinois.

Multi race .Studied in a foreign country .Fluent in several languages .

fascinated by diversity.A Romantic and a dreamer.Interest in healthy living

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  • Tiffany Gordon 26 days ago

    Nice work! I love how the prayer warriors lifted the darkness! What a great reminder that prayer is powerful!🙏🏾💪🏾

  • Great job on this. I really like that you began with the moon ate the sun

  • Rene Volpi 27 days ago

    Love the title as well. x

  • Babs Iverson27 days ago

    Creative & impressive take on the eclipse!!! ❤️❤️💕

  • I'd be sad if it only lasted 3 days. I'd want it to last forever 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

  • Shirley Belk28 days ago

    God forbid it should last 3 days....people would go bat-poop crazy.

  • Novel Allen28 days ago

    Crazy idea Mariann, it would certainly be the end of days if that happened. Sorry I have not caught up with the other challenge, I started to read them, they are a lot. Don't mind me, I am a weird person. Keep being lovely you.

  • Thank you for the thought! Hoping it doesn't happen!😊💕

  • I hope a three day eclipse won’t happen though. Thought-provoking piece!

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