"The Echo Has Teeth"
When questions grow fangs and the silence stops cooperating.

I left my name
on a mirror once—
fog-breathed and fading
before I could finish the last letter.
They called me by what they needed.
Helper. Listener.
Container of silence.
A friendly ghost in daylight.
But under my ribs?
Lanterns swing
in windless rooms,
each one lit
by a question that refuses
to shut up.
I asked “what now?”
It laughed like gravel.
I asked “who am I?”
and the echo had teeth.
Sometimes I pretend
my skin is paper—
just to feel the wind
try to write me new.
Still, I carry my shadows
like misread maps.
They whisper wrong directions
with such conviction
I almost follow.
But something in me—
the cracked compass,
the stargazer with a limp—
still believes
the broken path
is proof of motion.
And maybe
not knowing
is sacred.
Maybe
being lost
is just
the prelude
to blooming.
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Vishwaksen
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