The Door Left Open
A villanelle of abandonment
You left the door open, a cool breeze bit my skin,
Snow flurries covered the entrance, white and sore
I knew no one was coming back again.
After months of silence, thaw began within,
Frozen panels dripping, puddles on the floor.
You left the door open, a cool breeze bit my skin.
By six months, watercolor poppies, hummingbirds’ din,
Ribbons of sun spilled through the open door.
I knew no one was coming back again.
I waited, and waited, through winter, summer, spring,
Then fall reminded me of what I waited for.
You left the door open, a cool breeze bit my skin.
The risk was too great, another year grown thin,
Starless nights pressing, harsher than before.
I knew no one was coming back again.
So I gathered my will, though weary, worn within,
And closed it at last, though my heart was sore.
You left the door open, a cool breeze bit my skin,
I knew no one was coming back again.
About the Creator
Natasha Collazo
Selected Writer in Residency, Champagne France ---2026
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